Planning - Shot Ideas (and their progression)

Over the past two months I've been researching shot ideas. At the beginning of October, I drew my first mind map of the shots I wanted to use for the narrative aspect of my music video, which I have now developed to be more sophisticated, with more meaning behind them, as well as making them more specific and easier to link together. I think, because they're more thought out and deeper, they will hold the attention of the audience for longer as well. On the left are my orginial ideas (as inspired by other musics videos from similar genres in terms of form and music style), and on the right are my improved ideas.