Planning - Justification for my narrative structure.

I have almost finished the narrative side of my rough cut, and showed it to my teacher, who said the narrative was a little 'samey'. I think this is a fair point, and will try to put in a few more experimental shots / a climax to the narrative (as outlined in todrov's theory). However, my inspiration for the narrative came from 'Love The Way You Lie' (Eminem and Rihanna) and Rihanna's 'We Found Love', both of which have narrative structure similar to mine in the way it repeats to show the monotony and predicatbility of the relationship.