Editing - Rough Cut Done (without letterboxing)

Over the past few days, I have been putting together a rough cut of my music video so I can show it to my target audience in order to gain feedback from them. However, on this cut, I have not yet 'letterboxed' my spilt screens, which I am currently doing. I will post this after it's been done.
Overall I am pleased with my outcome, I feel it reflects the idea of being trapped in a routine of relationships, and obviously, when I've finished the editing and polishing of my film, I think it will look effective.